Age/Gender: 17, Male
Location: Illinois, United States
Job: Student / Lifeguard
I have a HUGE schlong.
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"This could have been a lot better."
The movie wasn't terrible, but it was terribly short. I like the style of the movie and even though the animation was basic, it flowed well and worked for the skit. My suggestion is to maybe make five to ten more of these shorts, and then submit them in one Flash. Also, it was a little boring due to the lack of background music, so I would suggest finding some appropriate music for the movie and place it quietly in the background.
Work on what you have already a little bit and I would love to see what else you can come up with.
Author's Response:
Ya, I was gonna put some backround music in, but I got lazy and said fuck it.
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"Quite the Flash to look forward to!"
Andrea364, you got your tablet yesterday and you are already pumping out great work! I'm truly impressed that a person your age can animate like this. To Newgrounds you will be a child prodigy if you keep striving towards the goal you are now. If this is what you can do on a tablet, I'm going to be amazed what you can do with a pencil on a piece of paper.
-The Good-
Since this is just a preview, I will say from what I saw that your series is looking to be sinister. The drawn characters are spectacular, and with the lines cleaned up a bit and fully colored, I'd say at age 14-15 you could have a Flash in the Top 50 of all time.
-The Bad-
This really should go in the Alpha section of Newgrounds, but then people wouldn't be exposed to your obvious talent. Clean up the lines and color up your final product and I will be sure to watch anything you release.
-Overall-
You are a talented artist, and this Flash was your first tablet product, and it was great! Keep striving and you will be a force to reckon with in the Flash community!
- PossiblePancakes
Author's Response:
Thanks, half of this was actually done by the mouse, the rest was tablet drawing. As for being fourteen, that will be in 2 years. You are truly flattering me. I rushed this badly so it isn't as good as it should be. Thanks for reviewing!
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-The Good-
I like the style of the color scheme. Grey, black, and white work great together. The graphics were decent, and it is a nice change from just toilet humor on Newgrounds.
-The Bad-
There wasn't too much that I didn't like. It would be nice if there was a little more animation and shading, but besides that, I can't think of anything else.
-Overall-
I liked the movie and it shows that you defiantly have potential! Keep it up.
- PossiblePancakes
Author's Response:
yeah, i was going to do a little more animation, but i'd only just heard the music and i really wanted to get the whole concept of it down, fast. given more time, im sure , i would have done a better job. also, thanks for the tips, it helps when people say exactly what was wrong/good with your movie.
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I was listening to Bring It by Cobra Starship when Portal Guard alarmed me of a new submission.
I do remember when people on the BBS were just babbling nonstop about Snakes on a Plane, it got quite annoying. All I can really say is, maybe try and move the voices away from Speakonia to make it more humorous, and even though I know you are a skilled artist, I need something constructive in this review.
See you around!
Author's Response:
Yeah, this was back last year when I used Speakonia very often. If I made this flash now, the graphics, animation and voices would be a lot better. :D
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I think it was cute cartoon. I liked the idea, and the graphics were pretty nifty. I can't really think of something to improve on with that cartoon, since the idea is pretty basic. I hope you decide to make more and soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
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This Flash definatly was worth watching with all the comedic humor. The graphics were decent and I commend you with a "Great job!". This goes on my favorites, keep these pumping, David. =)
Author's Response:
Thank you very much Pancakes! :D
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This is why I love you. Great humor, and it is ORIGINAL! For once, the Portal can be graced with something not-so-mainstream.
4/5
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<3
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=O
<3
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Amazing!
Author's Response:
Outstanding.
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Happy Clock Day!
Author's Response:
You, too! YAY
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Well, you finally made it here, Afro. The series has given me 80 b/p points and it was a great idea for a series. Good job on it, and I hope this gets where you want it to.
Bloody, brilliant!
~ Socially-Failed
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<3
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