Score: 2

"Not a game and a pretty dull movie"

submission: Madness Kill 1

date: September 21, 2009

First off, label the submission correctly, this wasn't a game but just a movie.

Secondly, while the quality of the animation wasn't terrible, the movie had no suspense or climax. It was simply a guy walking through several doors shooting several others. Try not to keep every encounter repetitive to the next, maybe allow the main character to miss or get struck by a bullet himself.

Keep trying, and maybe make a decent piece for Madness Day which is just on the horizon.

Score: 3

"This could have been a lot better."

submission: Shorts of Boredom ep1

date: January 27, 2009

The movie wasn't terrible, but it was terribly short. I like the style of the movie and even though the animation was basic, it flowed well and worked for the skit. My suggestion is to maybe make five to ten more of these shorts, and then submit them in one Flash. Also, it was a little boring due to the lack of background music, so I would suggest finding some appropriate music for the movie and place it quietly in the background.

Work on what you have already a little bit and I would love to see what else you can come up with.

Score: 3

"Am I mistaken?"

submission: pod quest demo

date: January 24, 2008

Or was that audio recorded by Robert Moran of http://www.urealms.com? It would be nice if you gave him some credit. As for the animation, you still have a lot to improve upon, but I have seen much worse.

If you make something worthwhile, then I will be gald to see your work in the Portal.

Score: 7

"Quite the Flash to look forward to!"

submission: Predator Series Preview X

date: September 30, 2007

Andrea364, you got your tablet yesterday and you are already pumping out great work! I'm truly impressed that a person your age can animate like this. To Newgrounds you will be a child prodigy if you keep striving towards the goal you are now. If this is what you can do on a tablet, I'm going to be amazed what you can do with a pencil on a piece of paper.

-The Good-
Since this is just a preview, I will say from what I saw that your series is looking to be sinister. The drawn characters are spectacular, and with the lines cleaned up a bit and fully colored, I'd say at age 14-15 you could have a Flash in the Top 50 of all time.

-The Bad-
This really should go in the Alpha section of Newgrounds, but then people wouldn't be exposed to your obvious talent. Clean up the lines and color up your final product and I will be sure to watch anything you release.

-Overall-
You are a talented artist, and this Flash was your first tablet product, and it was great! Keep striving and you will be a force to reckon with in the Flash community!

- PossiblePancakes

Score: 7

"A Heart-Touching Film"

submission: interference

date: September 30, 2007

-The Good-
I like the style of the color scheme. Grey, black, and white work great together. The graphics were decent, and it is a nice change from just toilet humor on Newgrounds.

-The Bad-
There wasn't too much that I didn't like. It would be nice if there was a little more animation and shading, but besides that, I can't think of anything else.

-Overall-
I liked the movie and it shows that you defiantly have potential! Keep it up.

- PossiblePancakes

Score: 4

"Speak of the Devil!"

submission: Snakes on a STFU

date: September 30, 2007

I was listening to Bring It by Cobra Starship when Portal Guard alarmed me of a new submission.

I do remember when people on the BBS were just babbling nonstop about Snakes on a Plane, it got quite annoying. All I can really say is, maybe try and move the voices away from Speakonia to make it more humorous, and even though I know you are a skilled artist, I need something constructive in this review.

See you around!

Score: 8

"You have potential."

submission: Hass and the Fence

date: September 29, 2007

I think it was cute cartoon. I liked the idea, and the graphics were pretty nifty. I can't really think of something to improve on with that cartoon, since the idea is pretty basic. I hope you decide to make more and soon.

Score: 7

"Decent"

submission: Building wars

date: August 26, 2007

I think you have potential, so keep up the good work! =)

If you want to stop sounds, use "stopAllSounds();". =)

Score: 5

"Great for a first"

submission: Short Naruto VS Sasuke!

date: August 24, 2007

I like how you had the actual Naruto sounds, and you do show potential. I recommend allowing people to press a button through text, so everyone can read it all.

Keep it up.

Score: 9

"Great!"

submission: Bear of a Problem

date: August 23, 2007

This Flash definatly was worth watching with all the comedic humor. The graphics were decent and I commend you with a "Great job!". This goes on my favorites, keep these pumping, David. =)