Score: 2

"Not a game and a pretty dull movie"

submission: Madness Kill 1

date: September 21, 2009

First off, label the submission correctly, this wasn't a game but just a movie.

Secondly, while the quality of the animation wasn't terrible, the movie had no suspense or climax. It was simply a guy walking through several doors shooting several others. Try not to keep every encounter repetitive to the next, maybe allow the main character to miss or get struck by a bullet himself.

Keep trying, and maybe make a decent piece for Madness Day which is just on the horizon.

Score: 3

"This could have been a lot better."

submission: Shorts of Boredom ep1

date: January 27, 2009

The movie wasn't terrible, but it was terribly short. I like the style of the movie and even though the animation was basic, it flowed well and worked for the skit. My suggestion is to maybe make five to ten more of these shorts, and then submit them in one Flash. Also, it was a little boring due to the lack of background music, so I would suggest finding some appropriate music for the movie and place it quietly in the background.

Work on what you have already a little bit and I would love to see what else you can come up with.

Score: 3

"Am I mistaken?"

submission: pod quest demo

date: January 24, 2008

Or was that audio recorded by Robert Moran of http://www.urealms.com? It would be nice if you gave him some credit. As for the animation, you still have a lot to improve upon, but I have seen much worse.

If you make something worthwhile, then I will be gald to see your work in the Portal.